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CindiMayweather
#1 Posted : 4/25/2014 7:34:42 AM

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I have an essay to write, I need the rough draft TOMORROW, it is 11:34 PM in Cali.

It is an argumentative essay, my topic is the rescheduling of psychedelic drugs for the purposes of research and therapy. I have a lot to say about the drugs I'll be discussing, I know which conditions I will be discussing, but I have NO CLUE on how to start writing this essay!!! I've been trying to outline and brainstorm, I simply cannot organize my thoughts properly! I completed a pre-writing exercise which I will post here, if anyone can give me any suggestions as to how to begin writing..

explain controversial issue by answering one or more of the following questions: What positions have people taken? What typically causes people to disagree over this issue? What is the issues history? Has the issue changed over time? What makes this issue important?

1. The controversial issue I will be discussing concerns psychedelics, and the reclassifying of them from Schedule I status. My paper will be focusing on the drugs MDMA, psilocybin, ibogaine, and dimethyltryptamine, perhaps touching on LSD and other drugs. These are drugs that could have legitimate uses in psychological therapy to treat conditions such as post-traumatic stress disorder(PTSD), addiction, or end-of-life anxiety in terminal cancer patients. Many people are reluctant to consider the possibility of positive uses of these substances because of their seemingly out-of-control use in the 1960s during the hippie movement, and the apparent drug-induced transformation of the academic Timothy Leary. Since the beginning of the Drug War, virtually all research of psychedelics ceased. In the 1990s, the regulatory dam cracked a bit with the efforts of Rick Strassman to research N,N-dimethyltriptamine(DMT) and the role it may play in mystical states or near-death experiences. More recently, MDMA has been enjoying a comeback as well, with current research focusing on its effects in treating PTSD. The reclassification of these drugs is necessary for conducting more research that could lead to the improved mental and emotional health of many people.

In the introductory paragraphs, how will you convince your readers that the issue exists or is serious enough to deserve their attention?

2. If you have ever known anyone with depression, who has suffered through trauma, who struggles with addiction or who has died or is dying from a terminal illness, this issue is important to you. These are conditions that don't only effect the people diagnosed with them, they effect their friends and families, whole communities even. The society we live in is one that causes and perpetuates these diseases through violence, pollution, the use of harmful chemicals, and isolating eachother. While we struggle to cease and desist these behaviors, the least we can do is to have compassion for people who are suffering the consequences.

Briefly discuss your understanding of your readers. Consider the following questions: how much do my readers know about this issue? What could I realistically hope to achieve with these particular readers - convincing them to adopt my point of view, getting them to reconsider their own position, motivating them to take action?

3. I understand that many of my readers may not be familiar with psychedelics, their effects or their uses. Most people are wary of illicit substances, and with good reason; however, I hope that the reader will at least consider that when used properly and under professional observation, psychedelics may provide a helpful tool to countless others.

Where do you stand on this controversial issue? State your position as clearly as possible.

4. I am for the reclassification, the research, and the prescribed, supervised use of psychedelics.

What are your reasons for taking this position? List four or more plausible reasons in the prewrite. You may modify or limit your reasons later.

5.(a) Current research data shows that these drugs may be useful in treating addiction, PTSD, and end-of-life anxiety. (b) Much early research depicting negative effects of these drugs was performed on unwilling inmates of mental institutions who had been diagnosed with severe mental illness such as schizophrenia, therefore these studies are flawed. (c) The classification of psychedelics as Schedule I narcotics(based on findings from earlier studies) bars further research of their effects, side effects and their potential harm or benefit to humans. (d) The criteria for Schedule I classification do not aptly describe psychedelics, as there is little to no potential for abuse, they are reasonably safe to use under medical supervision, and they show great potential for use in therapy.


What kinds of support do you think you will need to make your argument convincing (eg, statistics, examples, facts, anecdotes, quotations from authority)? Be specific. Where do you think you will find this information?

6. My reasons will be supported by statistics, examples, anecdotes, quotations from authority, and most importantly, FACTS. I have found a number of cool-looking charts online, from reputable sources. I have access to many books focused on psychedelics research at the public library and at least one in my own collection. I will be using examples and quotes by people who have used or researched psychedelics from videos, if permitted.

Identify at least one widely help opposing position and the reasons readers would likely give in support of this position. State one reason you do not accept and explain how you would counter-argue it (by pointing out where the reasoning is flawed or where argument lacks support).

7. The biggest opposing argument I've heard has to do with the irresponsible use and idolization of psychedelics during the 1960s. Timothy Leary and his buddies thought that LSD and other psychedelics were the key to enlightenment, and encouraged their widespread use among the masses. The nature of these drugs was grossly misrepresented and over-idealized to the public by Leary and his cohorts, and many after them as well, but the answer is not to hide them away and prohibit further research. This led to many people "tuning in and dropping out" of conventional society. Some people neglected duties and responsibilities because they thought they were living a more spiritual life by getting high all the time. However, before the sixties psychedelics were in use among some scholars, professionals and other intellectuals with no alarm. The problem then, was that the use was irresponsible, and that the users were naive and uncritical of their experiences. But the solution is not to further misrepresent these drugs so as to cause people to fear their use in research or medicine.
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#2 Posted : 4/25/2014 7:53:41 AM

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Bromo-LSD being schedule 1, even though it is not psychoactive, because it is an analog of LSD, is a good argument when you look at how it treats suicide headaches.
 
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#3 Posted : 4/25/2014 8:21:54 AM

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I have changed your all cap title that you gave to this topic. There is no reason to shout here.


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#4 Posted : 4/25/2014 8:53:04 AM

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Thanks, I think I may have gotten the ball rolling a little bit; I was panicking, a little too caffeinated perhaps lol. Also, I didn't mean to yell, only to convey a sense of urgency. Sorry anyways! I will try to remember and post my rough and final drafts up for review also, if Nexians would be interested in reading them.
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#5 Posted : 4/25/2014 9:10:17 AM

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I'Ve spotted two things i would change

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My paper will be focusing on the drugs MDMA, psilocybin, ibogaine, and dimethyltryptamine, perhaps touching on LSD and other drugs.


This is not concise enough. If you don't know which substances you'll be discussing, perhaps limit yourself to psychedelics and list psilocybin, LSD, DMT etc as examples ...

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6. My reasons will be supported by statistics, examples, anecdotes, quotations from authority, and most importantly, FACTS. I have found a number of cool-looking charts online, from reputable sources.


1. What seperates statistics, authority research, examples etc from facts ? Wording makes you sound defensive. Of course you will be presenting facts! Facts can be research, but also opinions, experiences etc. It's important how to critically asess these facts. Judge them. Imagine talking to a group of peers in the scientific community. While they are not immune to bias, their job description is to be non-biased. So you should expect them to be non-biased.

2. It doesn't matter if charts are "cool looking". They have to be easy to read and present data appropriatly.

edit: Ah, i see you've just written this for yourself...still, this might be valuable for you.

All in all, a good effort .
 
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#6 Posted : 4/25/2014 9:16:10 AM

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As for structure, i would start with a thought provoking idea. One example would be the idea that PTSD related veteran suicides could be prevented. I would start with something like that, then broaden the focus a bit and add a summarized explanation...then, launch directly into the introduction. I'd talk about the scope of the paper, what it is, what it isn't and why it is important. For the main part, i would pick out a limited number of arguments and really try to find pros and cons to both. Then, these arguments would have to be sustained by facts. I would put an emphasis on judging the quality of the research available and try to dismantle typical propaganda arguments. There are resources available on how to spot faulty logic...worth a look. In my summary i would draw a conclusion and suggest realistic steps, taking into account the current and political and cultual climate.

Good luck.

PS: You probably don't want to look like a biased, feverishly Pro-Drug Person.
 
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#7 Posted : 4/25/2014 9:40:08 AM

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Surely, I will not be making an "overly" enthusiastic case for the total legalization of all drugs, or even all psychedelic drugs. I will simply be making the case for looser restrictions and reclassifying for the purposes of research and/or treatment. The prewrite gave me a pretty good idea of what I want to talk about, but there is just so much information I am finding myself very over-whelmed and feel like I may have bitten off more than I can chew...I have a HUGE mouth, though, a powerful appetite and am very determined to push the envelope a little no matter where I'm at, and am determined to write this damned thing.

Also, yes, I know I mustn't be too casual or snide in my actual essays. I'm just a silly person, and chose to express that in the exercise lol.

I've got some great online sources for little bits of info, quickly filling up my 3-4 source quota. I will likely seek out and gain more. I am thinking of discussing using sites like this one and erowid as sources with my instructor.

I appreciate your comments very much, obliguhl. Thank you all!
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#8 Posted : 4/25/2014 9:59:00 AM

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Also, something I didn't consider before or during the pre-write, is that psychedelic research conducted with prison inmates resulted in the reduction of recidivism rates, and I'm not talking about Leary's research in Massachusetts, either.

http://jop.sagepub.com/content/28/1/62
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#9 Posted : 4/25/2014 1:22:07 PM

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CindiMayweather wrote:
Also, something I didn't consider before or during the pre-write, is that psychedelic research conducted with prison inmates resulted in the reduction of recidivism rates, and I'm not talking about Leary's research in Massachusetts, either.

http://jop.sagepub.com/content/28/1/62

If you're going to look at it from that angle, I would consider looking at this article.

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...While this study adds to the increasing body of scientific evidence regarding the merits of psychedelic compounds, it fails to acknowledge that the number one cause of incarceration for substance use is the treatment of substance use as a criminal issue, rather than a public health issue.

While the researchers state that their results "show that hallucinogen use is prospectively associated with a reduced likelihood of recidivism in a large sample of individuals under community corrections supervision with a history of drug involvement," they fail to engage with any broader social contexts or definitions of the question they are asking. In the context of the American criminal justice system, "Recidivism is measured by criminal acts that resulted in the rearrest, reconviction, or return to prison with or without a new sentence during a three-year period following the prisoner's release." [1] Therefore, when considering rates of recidivism, vis a vis substance use, there are two obvious paths to reduce or eliminate recidivism: 1) Engage in therapies and treatments to discourage the use of substances that have been criminalized, or 2) Decriminalize substances and treat substance abuse (not use) as a public health issue, rather than a criminal one.
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#10 Posted : 4/28/2014 12:41:58 AM

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I am switching my topic from rescheduling all the above mentioned psychedelics for the purposes of research, to focusing on DMT...perhaps for outright legalization...the paper I'd be writing would probably turn out to be waaayyyy too long and take waaayyyyy too much time, although I would like to tackle it on my own at a later date, instead of for an accelerated class with really short deadlines.
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#11 Posted : 4/28/2014 3:57:46 AM

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I feel you are really stressed about this essay.

My advice is clear your mind take a deep breath (meditate if your into that) and just write it.
Try not to second guess your points and such.

I understand the deadline part....idd be stressed too but just keep calm and give it your all

Please post your final draft for us to read.

Im sorry if this helps you in absolutely no wayCrying or very sad

Im not as smart as yall *yet* but im just trying to help out best I can.

Wish you best of luck on this

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#12 Posted : 4/29/2014 10:52:30 PM

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I agree with obie - make your point more concise. And shit, make it easier on yourself. Not psychedelics per se, but the various reactions people have to them, are wildly unpredictable. It's going to be hard to build a case around a subject without finite borders.

If I were you I might even consider just picking ONE drug - make a very strong argument. Then point out that if 1 drug can be wrongly scheduled, then surely there are others.

Edit - Watch this before you finish the paper. The Spirit Molecule Documentary on YouTube
 
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#13 Posted : 4/30/2014 3:11:22 AM

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I topped math, but failed at English, so I'm no good with helping on essay structure. The only thing I could suggest is to copy the format of another successful argument that has been waged and won, such as many of the cannabis debates.

Please post your essay when you have completed it - would love to read it. Good luck
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