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Wisdom27
#1 Posted : 11/25/2013 7:16:53 PM

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"Within your heart"

I look upon creation’s song,
cast aside the right and wrong,
immerse myself within the throng,
forgive the thought, “I don’t belong”~

Everywhere I gaze, I see,
myself within humanity~
Billions of faces, all are me,
I cannot be apart from thee~

As I forgive the myth of sin,
I see the light of love within~
As I see nothing to atone,
I can embrace you as my own~

With this view the truth reveals,
in this Love the whole world heals~
With this sight I fall apart,
and find myself within your heart~
 

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SalviaDroid
#2 Posted : 11/26/2013 4:42:40 PM
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Very nice poem! Is this written in couplets? Or I forget all of the different types, but I like how this ones ryhmes! Very well written too.

I was listening to Terence Mckenna last night and he said something about how poems aren't supposed to have meaning. They are just supposed to be. What are your thoughts about this, do you agree with him or do you usually put meaning in your poems.

I get a nice in depth feeling while I was reading this.

Keep up the great work my friend.
 
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#3 Posted : 11/26/2013 9:06:10 PM

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Sweet!- That's all, just sweet Smile
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#4 Posted : 11/26/2013 10:30:03 PM
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Beautiful!
 
 
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