This introduction was extremely short and tells nothing. Read others introductions for an idea of what they are meant to be.
There should be a guide on length to follow in my opinion. There isn't.
My point is: this introduction alone is not going to gain you full membership.
"Think more than you speak"
"How do you get rid of the pain of having pain in the first place? You get rid of expectations"
"You are everything that is. Open yourself to the love and understanding that is available."
"To see God, you have to have met the Devil."
"When you know how to listen, everyone becomes a guru."
" One time, I didn't do anything, and it was so empty... Almost as if I wasn't doing anything. Then I wrote about it. It was fulfilling."