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#1 Posted : 9/25/2012 2:58:19 PM

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Nice track aya Smile
 

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#2 Posted : 9/26/2012 11:10:51 PM
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That was very nice. My main thought while listening was that it sounded "mushy". You can take that however you want. Pleased

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#3 Posted : 9/27/2012 5:29:09 AM

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Great first track, Aya. Nothing wrong with keeping it short at this early stage.

A lot of good stuff there, including a good melodic theme. I would second Hixi on the "mushy" comment though... Especially in that second half, the bass gets so distorted that I thought it started to lose structure a bit. The melody in the background might be too distant to offer the structure that part needs... Maybe a bit more oomph on the kick drum, also for the sake of structure. Then maybe play around with the bass distortion parameters... You may find a version that sounds cleaner without giving up any energy or depth.

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#4 Posted : 9/27/2012 9:39:12 AM

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Personally I love this track, I like the "mushy" it gives a cool contrast between the melody. Although I really love the melody after the drop and agree it could be brought to the front more just because it is so sick. It's very dark and I get a horror/evil laboratory/resident evil type vision when I listen to it.

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#5 Posted : 9/27/2012 11:31:02 AM

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Good stuff! Keep it up Thumbs up
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#6 Posted : 10/1/2012 6:09:46 PM
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Can't wait to hear your second song!Cool
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