Personally I love this track, I like the "mushy" it gives a cool contrast between the melody. Although I really love the melody after the drop and agree it could be brought to the front more just because it is so sick. It's very dark and I get a horror/evil laboratory/resident evil type vision when I listen to it.
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'Little spider weaves a wispy web, stumblin' through the woods it catches to my head. She crawls behind my ear and whispers secrets. Dragonfly whiz by and sings now teach it.'