sweet track bro, good job!

cheers dude i appreciate you taking the time to check it. All the lyrics were inspired by my dmt experiences, so i hope some heads on here can relate to it.

anyone else into experimental hip hop shiz? I would love some feedback on this track, spent quite a bit of time making it ye know, so a good old fashoned critique would help a dude out. cheers

You remind me of Jehst in some way's. I am sure you know his music, the beat mainly reminded me of him.

Real Hip-Hop head here brother I am down to give you a critique, hit up my posts in this forum too and please do the same, I make beats.

1. Lyrics - Your flow, delivery, and cadence are on point. Subject matter is of the best kind

2. Beat, Production - Feelin the beat...could use a few more breaks and drops, perhaps a little refinement, but the sounds are spot on.

3. Overall - Dope, Ill, Fly, Crackilatin, Righteous shit!!!

4. More

yes! thank you mate. Glad you're feelin it

The beat was done by my friend and producer... its quite minimal, but that was perfect for what i wanted to do on it so was happy with how it turned out.

... and the answer to 4. ayeeeee! theres a new tune up dude, titled 'clockwork elves'

thanks again

I need to work on some minimal style sound oriented stuff, I enjoy the sounds he used, real gritty.