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areyouanywhere
#1 Posted : 2/17/2010 2:21:28 AM
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Well I guess it would be called that? I don't think many would appreciate it except maybe some here. I am not a writer, so please don't be to hard on me! I only wrote what I felt while... well, you know!


I am? I am left with more questions then answers
That is the point
Life is a mystery

I thought I knew what thinking was
They showed me what is really is
Question everything
Because sometimes you think you know
And that stops you from knowing

It's a mystery
I can see inside of me
In a way I never thought could be
For this I thank you
I am forever grateful.
 

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#2 Posted : 2/17/2010 2:23:41 AM

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Do you play an instrument? Can you turn it into a song?

Succinct. I like it, and it resonates.

Keep writing... what a beautiful way to log your journeys. Smile
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#3 Posted : 2/17/2010 2:36:21 AM
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No I don't play an instrument, but I have always wanted to learn. I could probably change some things around to sound better, but I think I should leave it be. Thank you for your kind words, their will be much more to come.
 
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#4 Posted : 2/17/2010 8:23:42 AM

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Don't worry, this is just great. Smile
 
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#5 Posted : 2/17/2010 4:16:04 PM

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areyouanywhere,

Nice work man! Normally, I'm strictly a prose girl - poetry doesn't do much for me. I felt deep resonance with your work . . .

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#6 Posted : 2/17/2010 4:48:09 PM

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Thank you for sharing!
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#7 Posted : 2/17/2010 7:23:15 PM
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My favorite way of conveying an experience is through hymns of sorts or a short amount of words..such as a poem...much like this. Smile

Very nice Pleased
 
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#8 Posted : 2/23/2010 2:13:58 AM
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Thank you everyone for your positive feedback, I love all of you.
 
 
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