Well I guess it would be called that? I don't think many would appreciate it except maybe some here. I am not a writer, so please don't be to hard on me! I only wrote what I felt while... well, you know!
I am? I am left with more questions then answers
That is the point
Life is a mystery
I thought I knew what thinking was
They showed me what is really is
Question everything
Because sometimes you think you know
And that stops you from knowing
It's a mystery
I can see inside of me
In a way I never thought could be
For this I thank you
I am forever grateful.
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Do you play an instrument? Can you turn it into a song? Succinct. I like it, and it resonates. Keep writing... what a beautiful way to log your journeys.  Some things will come easy, some will be a test
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No I don't play an instrument, but I have always wanted to learn. I could probably change some things around to sound better, but I think I should leave it be. Thank you for your kind words, their will be much more to come.
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Don't worry, this is just great.
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areyouanywhere, Nice work man! Normally, I'm strictly a prose girl - poetry doesn't do much for me. I felt deep resonance with your work . . . Pece & Love, Pandora "But even if nothing lasts and everything is lost, there is still the intrinsic value of the moment. The present moment, ultimately, is more than enough, a gift of grace and unfathomable value, which our friend and lover death paints in stark relief."-Rick Doblin, Ph.D. MAPS President, MAPS Bulletin Vol. XX, No. 1, pg. 2Hyperspace LOVES YOU
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Thank you for sharing! PK Dick is to LSD as HP Lovecraft is to Mushrooms
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My favorite way of conveying an experience is through hymns of sorts or a short amount of words..such as a poem...much like this. Very nice 
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Thank you everyone for your positive feedback, I love all of you.
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